And here's mine:
It was the longest of summers.
The summer that would change everything.
The summer that would change who they were.
Except for one of them.
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Here's the eighth, here's the photo:
Here's my response:
Lily was starting to wonder whether this baptism thing was really worth all the hassle.
17 comments:
Ah, and there were summers that did indeed change things for many at one time or another. Great MM for the day, Dave! Hope you have a great week!
Sylvia
Dang! That's good.
Summers were always a time for 'moving on', and change, whether abodes or partners.
And that "baptism" thing--aside from the fact it took you nearly 45 weeks to write--is REALLY very good. thanks!
You've got my attention. What happens next?
ooh, I wonder which one, and why? I like it.
You've left me wondering about the unchanged one! They all look as though they could do with a transformation!
Got a laugh out of me on the baptism one, that's for sure.
I loved both offerings today - aren't you the clever one at getting the most from the least? :)
Ohhhhh.... which one, hmmmmmmm..... :O)
Ah clever....you know we're going to drive you crazy asking which one, right? :)
I love a microfiction that makes me wonder about the figures in the picture and their future. Well done!
Ooh, yes, keeps us guessing, Dave.
Kay, Alberta
That first one is just brilliant!
I wonder what happened that summer....hmmm
Enjoyed your story this week. Cheers!
Now I can't wait to find out about this summer they're having!
Funny enough, Lily is that washer-girl's middle name. Hmm!
Terrific! It sounds like the back jacket of a book. Nice hook. There is a lot of intrigue simmering there.
The second one is funny - I can't decide if she's climbing in or climbing out!
Send Lily my best.
Thank you all again for reading.
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