Monday, 11 October 2010

Microfiction Monday #52 & #6

Microfiction Monday is one year old. Here's the photo:


And here's my response:

She was the only passenger on the train. This was not a going to be a train robbery that would go down in history as great.

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And here's the sixth, here's the photo:


And here's mine:

The rainbow twanged.

The rainquiver lay empty.

As the rainarrow shot off into space beginning an infinite journey to brighten up the universe.

20 comments:

Sylvia K said...

I think she may have a problem! Definitely not a robbery to go down in history! Fun one for the day, Dave! Have a great week!

Sylvia

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

It must have been the Lavender Hill Mob robbing the train. Nice one Dave.

SparkleFarkle said...

She was the only passenger on the train. This was not a going to be a train robbery that would go down in history as great.

Hm. This couldn't possibly be the event that sparked Michael Crichton's imagination. LOL!

Good one, Dave, glad I stopped by!

SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

P.S. Hear that? I'm singing to you in the post below!

EG Wow said...

I bet the empty train ruined her day!

Kay L. Davies said...

Very funny, Dave. I love the empty train robbery.

Kay, Alberta

Pat said...

Hmmm...I haven't heard of many successful middle-aged women train robbers. Maybe after her unsuccessful robbery she will turn from a life of crime and become a nurse.

Michael G-G said...

Dave does it again! (Ain't she the one possibly being robbed? That's how I read it.)

May your rainquiver be full of rainarrows this week.

Prayer Girl said...

Doesn't sound like much fun - robbing an empty train. Interesting MFM.

HERE IS MINE

PG

gospelwriter said...

No, I guess it wouldn't be the greatest train robbery... nice MM

Deborah said...

Very Good!!

Rinkly Rimes said...

Not a very well planned heist!

Greyscale Territory said...

She sounds like she may be the robber - maybe seeking goods already on the train! A feisty little old lady! Interesting micro!

Strummed Words said...

nothing and n o one to rob. What a bummer!

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

She didn't plan very well for this one! LOL Love the rainbow -- very poetic and lovely. Nice imagery.

septembermom said...

Pretty rainbow -- very nice :) Love the microfiction too. Very clever!

Dave said...

Once again, thank you all for reading.

ruthi said...

oh no... wrong timing. hahahah

Sioux Roslawski said...

Maybe the only "hold up" that will happen is when she tugs up her sup-hose?

Susan at Stony River said...

Oh, what a twist! But if she has all the danishes and donuts in the dining car all to herself, surely there's *something* great in it? LOL

The rainbows... ah, that explains things!

quilly said...

First, I hope you had a happy birthday.

It is hard to remain anonymous in a crowd of one. I wish her better luck next time.

Loved the visual images of the rainbow story. Well done.

(Sorry I am late, life complications!)