And here's my response:
She was the only passenger on the train. This was not a going to be a train robbery that would go down in history as great.
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And here's the sixth, here's the photo:
And here's mine:
The rainbow twanged.
The rainquiver lay empty.
As the rainarrow shot off into space beginning an infinite journey to brighten up the universe.
20 comments:
I think she may have a problem! Definitely not a robbery to go down in history! Fun one for the day, Dave! Have a great week!
Sylvia
It must have been the Lavender Hill Mob robbing the train. Nice one Dave.
She was the only passenger on the train. This was not a going to be a train robbery that would go down in history as great.
Hm. This couldn't possibly be the event that sparked Michael Crichton's imagination. LOL!
Good one, Dave, glad I stopped by!
SparkleFarkle~~~~~*
P.S. Hear that? I'm singing to you in the post below!
I bet the empty train ruined her day!
Very funny, Dave. I love the empty train robbery.
Kay, Alberta
Hmmm...I haven't heard of many successful middle-aged women train robbers. Maybe after her unsuccessful robbery she will turn from a life of crime and become a nurse.
Dave does it again! (Ain't she the one possibly being robbed? That's how I read it.)
May your rainquiver be full of rainarrows this week.
Doesn't sound like much fun - robbing an empty train. Interesting MFM.
HERE IS MINE
PG
No, I guess it wouldn't be the greatest train robbery... nice MM
Very Good!!
Not a very well planned heist!
She sounds like she may be the robber - maybe seeking goods already on the train! A feisty little old lady! Interesting micro!
nothing and n o one to rob. What a bummer!
She didn't plan very well for this one! LOL Love the rainbow -- very poetic and lovely. Nice imagery.
Pretty rainbow -- very nice :) Love the microfiction too. Very clever!
Once again, thank you all for reading.
oh no... wrong timing. hahahah
Maybe the only "hold up" that will happen is when she tugs up her sup-hose?
Oh, what a twist! But if she has all the danishes and donuts in the dining car all to herself, surely there's *something* great in it? LOL
The rainbows... ah, that explains things!
First, I hope you had a happy birthday.
It is hard to remain anonymous in a crowd of one. I wish her better luck next time.
Loved the visual images of the rainbow story. Well done.
(Sorry I am late, life complications!)
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