Monday, 24 January 2011

Microfiction Monday #67 & #21

It's this blog's second birthday, but more importantly it's also Microfiction Monday:


"Dad?"

His old man remained silent.

"How long shall we wait?"

His father inhaled deeply before he replied.

"She'll come back."


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Here's the twenty-first picture:


Here's my response:

She struck a pose. "Don't look now, but are they taking photos?"

"I can't tell if I don't look."

"Just don't look like you're looking."

11 comments:

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Oh, so sad! This one is shrouded in mystery...did she die, did she run off, is she lost? You've got me thinking! Great job.

jabblog said...

Sad or silly to wait thus? Loyal and faithful, anyway.

gaelikaa said...

Two interesting memes. I'm here for the MM one in particular, but I'd say you handled both rather well.

Sylvia K said...

A real mystery you've set up, Dave, and a terrific take on the pic of the day! Hope you have a wonderful week! Enjoy!

Sylvia

Pat said...

The first one is heart-breaking. In so few words you've described excruciating sadness.

Second one--hilarious.

Mama Zen said...

Happy Blog Birthday!

I love that first microfiction.

Diane said...

Hope you've had a great 2 years. Happy Birthday! :O)

sylviamorice said...

Seems like we were on similar tracks this week with our micro fictions. Loved yours.
Have a great week and congrats on your second anniversary! Cheers~

Madeleine said...

I love them both. Excellent! :O)

Elizabeth Mueller said...

Great! The first one is sad. I hope she does come back. *Sniff*

♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥

Dave said...

Thank you all again.