And here's my attempt:
She shivered.
There was definitely a chill in the air.
"I must be getting old", she sighed, "I remember when all this was green."
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And here's the tenth, picture:
Here's my response:
Apart from at Christmastime, Santa didn't expect letters.
The restraining order was a missive too far.
He'd been a very bad boy...
15 comments:
Indeed, in a child's mind, 3 months ago was many years past. Unique and clever take on the photo!
Your second one cracked me up.
Hehehe! Age has a way of creeping up on all of us. :)
Good one! time had little meaning for us back then-Thanks
I love the adult mental voice of the little girl! Made me chuckle.
Ah, the feeling of fall and the coming winter can make even little ones feel older! I know just how she feels! Hope you have a great week, Dave!
Sylvia
I laughed out loud - 'I must be getting old' . . .
Very interesting take. I enjoyed your microfiction!
A child's perspective is so different! :O)
Missing summer!
Ah, the way a kid thinks everything takes FOREVER and then some.
Cute take on the MM prompt!
I like the way you managed to get into the mind of a child, where a few months may seem like years...very good MM.
Have a great week. Cheers!
Well I'm a child at heart. Albeit a child with a healthy mistrust of Santa...
Thanks for your input everybody.
And by Spring she'll be in need of a new wardrobe. Perhaps Santa could help?
Even a child may have a sense of time passing and change! And the Santa story is a very creative surprise!
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