Monday, 9 August 2010

Microfiction Monday #43

Microfiction Monday is a response to an image in 140 characters or less.

Here is the post for this week’s contest.

Here is the image:



And here is my response:

Stood on the beach, staring at nothing but clouds between sea and sky. He imagined the postcard’s view ahead.

He feared the spires might prick heaven and make God bleed.

7 comments:

Ellie said...

Ooo. . .what an interesting microfiction. The last line was the clincher. Loved it!

SouthLakesMom said...

Evocative! A totally different direction!

Jingle said...

beautiful micro fiction.

sylviamorice said...

Very poetic post today. I enjoyed it. See you next week!

septembermom said...

That is quite poetic. Well done.

hope said...

What a poetic way of explaining [last line]why I've never felt the need to visit there. Well done!

Dave said...

Thank you all