Monday, 13 December 2010

Microfiction Monday #61 & #15

It's Microfiction Monday again:


She washed the flags until they were the whitest of whites. This surrender would be the cleanest yet.

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Here's the fifteenth picture:


And here's my response:

Try as she might, Betty couldn't seem to avoid looking up the girl with the Coke's skirt. Even though she knew there was nothing to see.

18 comments:

Pat said...

I always look forward to coming to your website on Sundays, Dave, because I usually laugh, as I did after reading about Betty this time. I also like the double-entendre in the first one. Well done, as usual.

Diane said...

She's doing her part for the cause all right. :O)

Doctor FTSE said...

A very different interpretation from the usual. Well done.

Cheryl said...

Loved both of these, Dave. The coke one has me laughing like a fool.

izzy said...

Washing flags! great idea- surrender ? never !
Thanks-

Sylvia K said...

Probably the first clean surrender in history! I love it, Dave! Have a great week!

Sylvia

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Dianne said...

a clean surrender! brilliant
I love the look on Betty's face

the wild magnolia said...

Very original idea. Good job!

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

You have to love a girl on a mission. Good one!

Strummed Words said...

Tidy whites...

hope said...

I would never thought of a clean surrender...interesting!

Susan Fobes said...

A touch of humor with this entry-very unique!

sylviamorice said...

If only surrenders were that simple!LOL
Have a great week. Cheers!

Jinksy said...

What about going down fighting, instead?! LOL

SouthLakesMom said...

Love both of them! Very clever~

gaelikaa said...

Loved your MM. Good one!

http://gaelikaa-writeaway.blogspot.com/2010/12/washing-day-microfiction-monday-61.html

Dave said...

Thank you all.