And here is my response:
He waved.
Unfortunately the sea waved back.
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I discovered Microfiction Monday via Ellie Garratt's blog, but came late to the party so I've decided to start at the beginning and try to get caught up.Here is the picture that accompanied Susan's first ever Microfiction Monday:
And here is my attempt:
As far as getaway cars were concerned, it was more conspicuous than he would've liked.
His heart sank. They were as good as caught.
19 comments:
Funny one! Short and succinct. I also like the one you did for Micro #1! Have a great week. Cheers!
What a funny one, Dave! And, yes, short and succinct it is! Enjoy your week!
Sylvia
Good one, Dave. You just can't trust those wave shakes.
Both were great! Short and strong. :O)
Oh I loved this concise and so well put post for this picture.
My first try at a Micro-Fiction Monday is up.
PG
I guess one should be aware of who they are waving too. Both your entries are wonderful. I didn't start with Susan's MfM until about the third or fourth week.
LOL nice one. and since i can't swim really well, I would never try to be friendly with a wave.
Welcome to Microfiction Monday! this is my second week here (:
Very Good!
If I didn't know you were an actor would hear it in your writing. My daughter is a thespian on this side of the pond
Nice MFM
moon smiles
mine is Here
Nice to meet you btw
The sea waved back. Too funny! I loved it.
Have a great week x
Love this so "annoyingly" logical response to a wave of greeting! Very creative!
I like your take on this! We;; done!
Funniest one yet! Thanks for the laugh.
it makes me smile,
love the gesture of ave waving back...
This is fantastic. So short and yet so funny.
Both good ones. Here's my 140. Sorry for the delay but dealing with drama of son having to dash across Italy to catch his flight. Hope your week goes better then his!
Excellent! VERY brief, but pithy! LOVE IT -- glad you came late!
Well-played, my friend.
Thanks for reading
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