Monday, 13 December 2010

Microfiction Monday #61 & #15

It's Microfiction Monday again:


She washed the flags until they were the whitest of whites. This surrender would be the cleanest yet.

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Here's the fifteenth picture:


And here's my response:

Try as she might, Betty couldn't seem to avoid looking up the girl with the Coke's skirt. Even though she knew there was nothing to see.
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18 comments:

  1. Pat13 December 2010 at 00:28

    I always look forward to coming to your website on Sundays, Dave, because I usually laugh, as I did after reading about Betty this time. I also like the double-entendre in the first one. Well done, as usual.

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  2. Diane13 December 2010 at 13:25

    She's doing her part for the cause all right. :O)

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  3. Doctor FTSE13 December 2010 at 13:34

    A very different interpretation from the usual. Well done.

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  4. Cheryl13 December 2010 at 13:36

    Loved both of these, Dave. The coke one has me laughing like a fool.

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  5. izzy13 December 2010 at 13:53

    Washing flags! great idea- surrender ? never !
    Thanks-

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  6. Sylvia K13 December 2010 at 15:34

    Probably the first clean surrender in history! I love it, Dave! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  7. annies home13 December 2010 at 15:41

    very creative answers you can see mine at http://shopanies.blogspot.com

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  8. Dianne13 December 2010 at 15:52

    a clean surrender! brilliant
    I love the look on Betty's face

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  9. the wild magnolia13 December 2010 at 17:07

    Very original idea. Good job!

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  10. Lisa Ricard Claro13 December 2010 at 17:52

    You have to love a girl on a mission. Good one!

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  11. Strummed Words13 December 2010 at 19:19

    Tidy whites...

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  12. hope13 December 2010 at 23:27

    I would never thought of a clean surrender...interesting!

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  13. Susan Fobes14 December 2010 at 00:52

    A touch of humor with this entry-very unique!

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  14. Anonymous14 December 2010 at 03:33

    If only surrenders were that simple!LOL
    Have a great week. Cheers!

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  15. Jinksy14 December 2010 at 15:40

    What about going down fighting, instead?! LOL

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  16. SouthLakesMom14 December 2010 at 16:30

    Love both of them! Very clever~

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  17. Maria15 December 2010 at 04:03

    Loved your MM. Good one!

    http://gaelikaa-writeaway.blogspot.com/2010/12/washing-day-microfiction-monday-61.html

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  18. Dave16 December 2010 at 17:57

    Thank you all.

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