Monday, 24 January 2011

Microfiction Monday #67 & #21

It's this blog's second birthday, but more importantly it's also Microfiction Monday:


"Dad?"

His old man remained silent.

"How long shall we wait?"

His father inhaled deeply before he replied.

"She'll come back."

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Here's the twenty-first picture:


Here's my response:

She struck a pose. "Don't look now, but are they taking photos?"

"I can't tell if I don't look."

"Just don't look like you're looking."
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11 comments:

  1. Lisa Ricard Claro24 January 2011 at 11:19

    Oh, so sad! This one is shrouded in mystery...did she die, did she run off, is she lost? You've got me thinking! Great job.

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  2. jabblog24 January 2011 at 12:36

    Sad or silly to wait thus? Loyal and faithful, anyway.

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  3. Maria24 January 2011 at 14:02

    Two interesting memes. I'm here for the MM one in particular, but I'd say you handled both rather well.

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  4. Sylvia K24 January 2011 at 15:46

    A real mystery you've set up, Dave, and a terrific take on the pic of the day! Hope you have a wonderful week! Enjoy!

    Sylvia

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  5. Pat24 January 2011 at 17:44

    The first one is heart-breaking. In so few words you've described excruciating sadness.

    Second one--hilarious.

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  6. Maude Lynn24 January 2011 at 18:42

    Happy Blog Birthday!

    I love that first microfiction.

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  7. Diane24 January 2011 at 19:13

    Hope you've had a great 2 years. Happy Birthday! :O)

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  8. Anonymous24 January 2011 at 19:33

    Seems like we were on similar tracks this week with our micro fictions. Loved yours.
    Have a great week and congrats on your second anniversary! Cheers~

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  9. Anonymous24 January 2011 at 20:09

    I love them both. Excellent! :O)

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  10. Elizabeth Mueller24 January 2011 at 21:41

    Great! The first one is sad. I hope she does come back. *Sniff*

    ♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥

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  11. Dave31 January 2011 at 00:49

    Thank you all again.

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