Monday, 25 October 2010

Microfiction Monday #54 & #8

It's Microfiction Monday once more. Here's the photo:


And here's mine:

It was the longest of summers.
The summer that would change everything.
The summer that would change who they were.
Except for one of them.


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Here's the eighth, here's the photo:


Here's my response:

Lily was starting to wonder whether this baptism thing was really worth all the hassle.

17 comments:

  1. Ah, and there were summers that did indeed change things for many at one time or another. Great MM for the day, Dave! Hope you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  2. Summers were always a time for 'moving on', and change, whether abodes or partners.

    And that "baptism" thing--aside from the fact it took you nearly 45 weeks to write--is REALLY very good. thanks!

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  3. You've got my attention. What happens next?

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  4. ooh, I wonder which one, and why? I like it.

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  5. You've left me wondering about the unchanged one! They all look as though they could do with a transformation!

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  6. Got a laugh out of me on the baptism one, that's for sure.

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  7. I loved both offerings today - aren't you the clever one at getting the most from the least? :)

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  8. Ohhhhh.... which one, hmmmmmmm..... :O)

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  9. Ah clever....you know we're going to drive you crazy asking which one, right? :)

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  10. I love a microfiction that makes me wonder about the figures in the picture and their future. Well done!

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  11. Ooh, yes, keeps us guessing, Dave.

    Kay, Alberta

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  12. That first one is just brilliant!

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  13. I wonder what happened that summer....hmmm
    Enjoyed your story this week. Cheers!

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  14. Now I can't wait to find out about this summer they're having!

    Funny enough, Lily is that washer-girl's middle name. Hmm!

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  15. Terrific! It sounds like the back jacket of a book. Nice hook. There is a lot of intrigue simmering there.

    The second one is funny - I can't decide if she's climbing in or climbing out!

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  16. Send Lily my best.

    Thank you all again for reading.

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