Monday, 6 September 2010

Microfiction Monday #47 & #1

It's monday again. Susan provides an image and invites responses of 140 characters or less. Here is this week's image:


And here is my response:

He waved.

Unfortunately the sea waved back.

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I discovered Microfiction Monday via Ellie Garratt's blog, but came late to the party so I've decided to start at the beginning and try to get caught up.

Here is the picture that accompanied Susan's first ever Microfiction Monday:


And here is my attempt:

As far as getaway cars were concerned, it was more conspicuous than he would've liked.

His heart sank. They were as good as caught.
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19 comments:

  1. Anonymous6 September 2010 at 00:41

    Funny one! Short and succinct. I also like the one you did for Micro #1! Have a great week. Cheers!

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  2. Sylvia K6 September 2010 at 00:51

    What a funny one, Dave! And, yes, short and succinct it is! Enjoy your week!

    Sylvia

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  3. Pat6 September 2010 at 01:02

    Good one, Dave. You just can't trust those wave shakes.

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  4. Diane6 September 2010 at 02:11

    Both were great! Short and strong. :O)

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  5. One Prayer Girl6 September 2010 at 03:18

    Oh I loved this concise and so well put post for this picture.

    My first try at a Micro-Fiction Monday is up.

    PG

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  6. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}6 September 2010 at 03:46

    I guess one should be aware of who they are waving too. Both your entries are wonderful. I didn't start with Susan's MfM until about the third or fourth week.

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  7. humangal6 September 2010 at 04:43

    LOL nice one. and since i can't swim really well, I would never try to be friendly with a wave.

    Welcome to Microfiction Monday! this is my second week here (:

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  8. Deborah6 September 2010 at 06:17

    Very Good!

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  9. moondustwriter6 September 2010 at 07:28

    If I didn't know you were an actor would hear it in your writing. My daughter is a thespian on this side of the pond

    Nice MFM

    moon smiles

    mine is Here

    Nice to meet you btw

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  10. Ellie Garratt6 September 2010 at 07:36

    The sea waved back. Too funny! I loved it.

    Have a great week x

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  11. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela Adams6 September 2010 at 10:45

    Love this so "annoyingly" logical response to a wave of greeting! Very creative!

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  12. EG CameraGirl6 September 2010 at 12:33

    I like your take on this! We;; done!

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  13. hope6 September 2010 at 16:08

    Funniest one yet! Thanks for the laugh.

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  14. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall6 September 2010 at 20:44

    it makes me smile,

    love the gesture of ave waving back...

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  15. Anonymous6 September 2010 at 21:24

    This is fantastic. So short and yet so funny.

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  16. John (@bookdreamer)6 September 2010 at 22:39

    Both good ones. Here's my 140. Sorry for the delay but dealing with drama of son having to dash across Italy to catch his flight. Hope your week goes better then his!

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  17. SouthLakesMom7 September 2010 at 02:41

    Excellent! VERY brief, but pithy! LOVE IT -- glad you came late!

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  18. Unknown7 September 2010 at 15:04

    Well-played, my friend.

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  19. Dave8 September 2010 at 12:14

    Thanks for reading

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